It's a very interesting start though, the "She & Him" and placement of the date/austin is working well. There's a nice sense of motion and fluidity in the top, with the relationship between the elements. I think you could use a little more work on some of the sizing, and styling choices.
Also the "Will you be there?" is getting lost, and seems out of place. perhaps for the logos/sponsor text just break the grid and run it Horizontal, so it feels less awkward in space.
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It's a very interesting start though, the "She & Him" and placement of the date/austin is working well. There's a nice sense of motion and fluidity in the top, with the relationship between the elements. I think you could use a little more work on some of the sizing, and styling choices.
Also the "Will you be there?" is getting lost, and seems out of place. perhaps for the logos/sponsor text just break the grid and run it Horizontal, so it feels less awkward in space.
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